sms sms cinta

sms untuk attin (24 maret ’03 --> faqih 8th years old)
“sekeping hati disana tetap menawanku di penjara cintanya..
menemani sendiriku
di tiap titik air mata
dan lelah yang tersandar di dada..
: ‘apa kabar surga?’”
 
(untuk attin) --> tanggalnya lupa! punten euy..
“menghitung hadirmu sekeping hatiku..
dalam detak jantung..
dari desir aliran darah.
pada kerjap mata..
dan tiap tarikan napas..
rindu itu menyiksa.”
 
buat attin.. sekeping hatiku..
“aku rindu..
tatapan sayangmu
hangatnya menyelusup ke tiap sudut di hati ku
bahagiakan dengkur tidur
dan kerjap mata di awal hari
selamat tidur keping hatiku..
-april 2004-
 
tiga tulisan di atas adalah sms-sms kerinduan untuk seorang teman. namanya attin. Dari sekian sms yang terkirim cuma tiga tadi yang tercatat di agenda.
teman lain ada yang bilang (dengan sedikit cemburu) kalo sms-sms jenis tadi adalah sms gombal.

ngga apa deh gombal. yang penting ada media untuk menumpahkan rindu.
Hehehehe.. 
 

Comments

Anonymous said…
delia's said :

huh. gita gombal! sama aku jarang banget kirim2 sms yang gombal gini. tapi gak papa lah, aku tau kok : from the bottom of your heart, you love me much... hehehe.....
jamil said…
i bet u r right.. *senyam senyum nggak jelas*
gendo said…
goo/GeNdO 2.04 am waktu Lab Telkom

how about me git??? hehehehe
jamil said…
buat gendo:

u 2
i luv u all ma friend..

misalnya musholla rtc
loe itu sala satu makluk yang menggerakkan langkah, waktu, tenaga dan pikiran guwe untuk terus melakukan sesuatu untuk musholla rtc

loe juga yang membuat guwe berusaha lebih baik mengerjakan sesuatunya untuk musholla rtc. ketika elo meninggalkannya -gara gara guwe yang pemalas berat ini kerjanya ngga perna beres. hehehe. ups-

walo sampe sekarang pun guwe belom pernah bisa jadi orang yang 'organized' guwe thx banget kepada Allah Swt. atas elo di kehidupan guwe, ndo..

hehehe...
*malah nyengir. bukannya serius*
Anonymous said…
Delhi, Hudson Lane, Sun.night,
18 Dec.05.

Dear Jamil,

L O V E

S.M.S.

a.

===================================
Let I start to write something here. I have not much time left
acually.

Love messages via SMS are very
common now of course.
The people needs are the same.
Now they use new technology helps.

A new way in personal communication and social/public
benefits with the help of SMS.

Love: Orto Delh.
Anonymous said…
Delhi, Hudson Lane,Mon.evening,19 Dec.05.

Dear Jamil,

L O V E

S.M.S.

(b).
***********************************

You wrote about a piece of heart
that offers its kindness in the jail of its love, accompany you
in each time of tears and tiredness. You or she/he asked the question: "How are you,dear".

Your heart count her(or his?)
present which you feel with each throb of of your heart and fast move of your blood, in each blink
of eyes, in each breathing-in ...
that longing disturb you.

I seems that you longing to the loving/kind stare that create warmness in each corner of your heart that allow you to have your
snoring sleep and and start your life each day with your own blinks of eyes. And a greeting/reminder again:
"Have a nice(day), dear!".

Did I catch the intention of your
poem correctly?. Some misplacing, misunderstanding here and there?.

It is a story of kindness, friendship that you need to convey
to the golden heart Attin.

Delia is in the opinion that you wrote an "archaic" (cheap?) things.
She herself rarely wrote that kind of messages. She feels that it is all right since she knows that
from the bottom of your heart, you love her so much.

(Delia = dahlia?. I am expecting to see 5 or 6 different colours of dahlia in parks this winter).

Goo (Gendo) is your helpful and diligent friend. Possibly you could learn how to be an organized person from Goo?.

You are lucky to have those lovely friends with beautiful hearts.

Love: Orto Delh.

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